Shining Star-BTS
The characters were very compatible and fit together nicely. I did have to change the Hawaii story to first person and rewrite a bunch of it to accomplish that, but the actions were already laid out.
Lane Bailey
Writing, Photography and Real Estate
11
May
Shining Star-excerpt 2
Published in Book, Novel Excerpt, Star-Jilted, UnpublishedI thought I knew everything about him, but I couldn’t tell if he was sincere or mocking. His response knocked me back. The last thing I expected was for him to have any regard for my feelings. I was sure that he assumed I had no regard for his, not after the way I left.
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9
May
Shining Star-excerpt 1
Published in Book, Novel Excerpt, Star-Jilted, UnpublishedBut in the next moment, what I was seeing was her feet flying up in the air and over the side of the boat. It looked like she had been trying to get her sister to shoot a picture of her with a whale tail in the background… then the boat lurched, flipping her over the side.
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20
Apr
Beta Reading Opportunities
Published in Beta Reads, Book, In Real LifeRealistically, I have seven stories in progress. Three are within striking distance of ready. Two more are 75% ready. The last two are only in the 20% range. I’m going to need plenty of readers…
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Tags: At Arms Length, beta readers, Chased, Death Star, Invisible, railroaded, Shining Star, Sniper, unpublished
