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Saturday, 13 June 1981 – Conclusion
“Easy there, Jack. It’s ok. You seem like a nice kid. I was going to tell you that she really likes Darryl’s 1895, over by the Coliseum Mall. Take her there and dinner is on me… I’ll even let you drive the 911 if you want. It’s her favorite car,” he said, cracking a good-natured smile.
“Mr. Prince, do you mind me asking why you would do that? Why me? Amy is one of the most popular girls in school, and I’m just some kid…”
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“Some kid that has known her from the day we moved here, Jack. You might not remember, but I brought her to school on her first day, in fourth grade. I watched her walk into a classroom of strangers that morning. The teacher introduced her to the class, and she sat at the only empty desk… which was next to yours. And you introduced yourself. Later, the teacher told me that you came over to sit with her at lunch when she was by herself. You sat with her at recess when everyone else was with their other friends.”
“I guess…”
“Jack, she was excited to go to school the next day, and the day after that because of you. She was devastated when we left Florida, but you made it better. I owe you one, Son.”
“Thank you, Mr. Prince. I don’t know what to say.”
“Go ask her out… that would be a good start,” as Mr. Prince gave Jack a wink and a smile.
“Yes, Sir.”
***
Jack walked back into the house with purpose. Amy’s father telling him that particular story was probably more motivational than either could have imagined. He had worked his courage up to an eleven. When he saw Terry in the Family Room, he asked him where Amy was.
“I think she’s out by the pool… at least she was a minute ago.”
Jack purposefully marched across the room and out the door.
As soon as he saw her, his knees started to quake. Her curly blonde hair shimmered in the moonlight. She wasn’t standing with Paul, but he was only an arm’s reach away. They weren’t going out again, were they? Was Jack going to have to get in a fight for asking Amy out? Even if he and Amy weren’t together, Paul thought of her as property… he had acted like he’d owned her for years. Almost all the way back to that first day she was at his school. Jack knew he could take Paul down if he had to, but he didn’t want to be “that guy” and cause a ruckus at someone’s party.
As Jack paused there in the doorway, Mrs. Prince strode out from the kitchen door and directly toward Paul.
“Paul, can you help me with something?” she asked.
“In a minute,” he replied.
Jack turned to Mrs. Prince, “I can help you. What do you need?” he said as he intercepted her.
“Jonathan, hi. What you can help me with is to get my daughter away from that jerk,” She whispered.
Wow… Jack didn’t know what to think.
“Call me Jack. Everyone does,” Jack said as he smiled.
Mrs. Prince continued walking over to Paul and lightly took his elbow. Jack heard her mention something about a box on a shelf she couldn’t reach. He heard Paul ask her where her husband was… and why he couldn’t get it. But she was undeterred. She was finally able to manage getting him away from the area Amy was in.
Courage was way down from that eleven a moment ago… maybe a seven. He could still do this. He looked over at Amy. ‘How could he be intimidated by a girl that only stood a couple of inches over five feet? Heck, she couldn’t weigh more than a hundred pounds dripping wet. Because I’m not fighting her, I’m asking her out’, he thought to himself. ‘This is WAY scarier.’
He closed the distance… just a couple feet away.
Courage down to five… tops.
“Hi Amy”
“Hey Jonathan. What’s up? Are you ok? You look a little… pale.”
“I’m good… I think. Can I talk to you for a minute?”
“I’d like that.”
“Like in private… or something?”
“I guess,” as she kind of scrunched up her forehead, wondering what was going on. He looked like he was about to pass out. She was thinking she might need to find him a seat. “Should we go into the kitchen?”
“NO… I mean, no… maybe we can just walk out across the yard…” he said, his voice cracking on the first word.
As she turned to walk out into the yard, she slid her arm into his. He didn’t even know if he could talk now. When had she actually touched him last, Jack thought? He suddenly remembered her punching him in the arm in sixth grade… was that it?
“Are you ok, Jonathan? You are acting kind of weird.”
She was the only person that ever called him Jonathan. Well, her and his grandmother, but that was it.
“I’m ok… I… “
“Want to sit on the bench?”
“Ahh, sure.”
“So, what’s on your mind?” She looked at him intently.
“Will you marry me?”
“Jonathan… I… I… I…” she said, her eyes wide with surprise.
“Wait… I meant will you go out with me… like on a date?” he quickly added as his eyes drifted toward the ground. Jack wanted to crawl into a hole and die. He was mortified. He had just asked her to marry him and even in the pale light at the back of the yard, he could see that all the color drained out of her face. His too. He was positive that if he tried to stand up right now, he would pass out.
“Oh… You scared me for a minute there. I mean you are nice and everything, but…”
Here it comes, Jack thought. She is going to shoot me down. At least I can go to my grave knowing I gave it a shot.
“I was just thinking it might be nice to have dinner or something, maybe Darryl’s…” he blurted out before she could finish.
You’re about as smooth as sandpaper, Jack thought to himself. Breathe. Breathe again.
“I was just going to say that it might be a little sudden to get married,” she said as she giggled.
As she finished saying it, she looked over his shoulder and greeted Sherry.
“Oh, hey Sherry, what’s up?” Amy said.
“Just getting a little fresh air… saw you guys over here and thought I’d say hi… Unless you wanted me to go,” the pitch of her voice dropped a little and the last words dragged out. It dawned on her that Jack might have been trying to talk to Amy in private. “I should go.”
Jack was silent…
“No, you can hang out with us if you want,” Amy said.
There was an awkward conversation for the next few minutes… at least Jack felt awkward. Sherry and Amy were talking about all sorts of stuff… mostly clothes or make-up or something, maybe. Jack was zoned out. He spent the whole time just hoping Sherry would get up and walk away so that Amy could let him down easy…
“What do you think, Jonathan?”
“Huh?”
“You weren’t even listening, were you?” Sherry said.
“What? No… sure. I was listening.”
“What were we talking about, then?” Amy might have said it, but both girls were thinking it.
“Umm. Ok, I was just thinking about something.”
Sherry smirked. “I bet you were.” Then gave Amy some secret, knowing look and a giggle.
Jack was sure he was going to die right there. If he thought he could get up and make it across the yard, he would have run away. But he was sure he would drop dead from embarrassment before he got to the house. He had to take the shot, though.
“I’m going to go get a drink,” he mumbled… thinking he would try for the kitchen. When he turned and looked, he saw Paul standing right by the doors into the Family Room. That meant the kitchen was clear. He had to get to get out of there.
Jack got up and started walking across the yard, thinking that walk had become much longer while he was sitting there. With Amy’s arm in his, it had only taken a moment to cross yard, but now, after rejection, it felt like he’d been walking for an hour… and he wasn’t any closer to the kitchen.
He couldn’t catch what they were saying, but he could hear Sherry and Amy talking and laughing behind him. He didn’t even want to know what their conversation was about. They were probably joking about him thinking that Amy would even entertain the idea of going out with him.
Finally reaching the kitchen, he walked in the door. ‘Too bad there wasn’t any booze… I could drown my troubles’. He hadn’t actually ever had a drink, but it seemed like what they always did in the movies.
“Can I get you a drink, Jonathan… Jack?”
“Make it a double, Mrs. Prince.”
“Four fingers of punch, coming up,” she replied with a smile. “What happened? She didn’t say no, did she?”
“I don’t know… I couldn’t sit there anymore. She was gonna…”
Jack didn’t know why he was saying all of this to Amy’s mom. He hadn’t really seen her except in passing at a few school events since Amy moved to Hampton. It wasn’t like she had ever actually talked to him much before or anything.
“Does Amy call you Jack?”
“No… I don’t think she ever has,” he replied, thinking.
“Well… Jack… she never calls you Jack when she talks about you at home, either. Always Jonathan. It’s kind of funny. She calls everyone else by their nicknames. All but you.”
“Oh.”
Jack was thinking through what Chrissy had just said when Sherry walked in. Before he could ask what Amy said about him at home, Sherry was sitting on the stool next to him at the breakfast counter.
“Amy was wondering if you could bring her a punch when you go back out there.”
“Sure… I guess.”
Jack had just been thinking how much he was not looking forward to walking back across the yard… like walking to his own execution. Chrissy put a drink for Amy down in front of him and wished him luck.
He barely remembered to grab his own drink as he stood up to go face his fate.
Once more into the breach.
Jack looked up as he walked across the yard and saw that Amy was still sitting on the bench. She was looking toward the Family room part of the back patio. When he followed her gaze, it went straight to… Paul. He looked back down at his feet as he kept walking.
“I thought you were never coming back,“ Amy said… a little too cheerfully. “I was getting thirsty out here.”
“Oh. Sorry.”
“That’s ok. You’re here now,“ she said as Jack handed Amy her drink. “So, where were we? Oh yeah, you asked me to marry you.”
Jack felt himself flush and couldn’t help but notice her grin when she said that. It felt like she twisted the knife he stabbed himself with. He didn’t see actual malice in her eyes, but that’s all he could think. His eyes lowered… and his head followed. He was defeated. Defeat.
Then she kissed him on the cheek.
“I’d love to. When should we go? I’m not busy tomorrow?”
He looked up. “Huh?”
“I said we can go tomorrow. To dinner. I think you said Darryl’s?”
“I… I … I heard you,” he said softly. “Sure. Tomorrow? How about seven?”
“I’m looking forward to it. I’ll talk to you later, ok?”
“Ok… Great.” He said as she bounded up to walk away. She gave him a quick hug before she headed back toward the house.
When he looked back at the house, the first thing he saw was Paul… looking straight at him. He turned his head slightly and saw that Amy was walking toward the kitchen. He looked back and saw Paul was still staring at him. Then he noticed Mr. Prince was talking to Paul. And so was Terry.
What the heck is going on, he asked himself.
As he got up to walk back toward the house, Terry started walking toward him.
“Hey, Jack, let’s go grab some punch in the kitchen.”
“Sure… What’s going on?”
“I’ll tell you in the kitchen,” Terry said as he steered Jack away from everyone else.
Mrs. Prince handed Terry a couple of glasses of punch. Terry handed one to Jack.
“I think Paul wants to kill you,” Terry said… too casually.
“Crap.”
“No, it’s ok. I think Mr. Prince wants to kill Paul. My money is on Mr. Prince.”
“What the heck happened?”
“Well… I saw you over there talking to Amy when Sherry went over there. I was going to try to come back and drag Sherry away… I figured you were asking Amy out and thought Sherry really wasn’t going to help you on that front. Then I saw Paul looking like he was going to make his way over there. Being pretty sure that would be even less helpful, I tried to intercept him. I started asking him things about my Camaro… You know, he doesn’t know anything about cars. He was…” Terry rambled.
“Terry, focus, Man,” Jack said as he tried to draw Terry back to what was going on with Paul.
“Sorry. Anyway, I kept trying to turn him away from you guys. Next thing I know, Mr. Prince is standing next to me and talking to Paul, too. I turned around and you were walking across the yard. I think he herded Paul toward the Family room. I was going to come to the kitchen and talk with you but saw Sherry coming across the yard. What happened in here with Mrs. Prince?”
“I don’t really know. I know we talked, but I really don’t remember what she said. And then Sherry came in and told me to take a drink to Amy.”
“Man, that was when it started to get dicey, Jack. Mr. Prince was trying to get Paul in the house as soon as he saw you come out. I think he was asking him about stereos or something. I don’t know. But I thought he was going to push him inside. Paul kept staring at you, then you got up… and here we are.”
“Jonathan… Jack… I don’t know if I can get used to thinking of you as Jack, sorry,” Chrissy said as she walked over to the two teens.
“That’s Ok, Mrs. Prince. You can call me whatever you want,” Jack said with a smile. “And I really appreciate you talking with me earlier.”
“Jonathan? Who is Jonathan?” Terry asked.
“That’s me. It’s my actual name. But the only person that ever called me that was my grandmother… and Amy.”
“So, where did ‘Jack’ come from, if you don’t mind me asking?” Chrissy said.
“No, that’s ok. My dad always said that ‘Jack’ was a nickname for John, like John Kennedy. My family always called me Jack… except for my grandmother, my mom’s mom. She always calls me Jonathan, not Jack, not Jon. Always Jonathan. I don’t know why, though. Everybody else has just always called me Jack,” he babbled
“Then why does Amy call you Jonathan?” Chrissy asked.
Jack sat there for a minute thinking.
“Because I’m not ‘everybody else,’” Amy said as she came down the back stairs into the kitchen. She paused, “You really don’t remember?”
“I guess not.”
Chrissy piped up, “I think I know why…”
“Mom, you REALLY need to stop talking now…” Amy pleaded, “Please?”
“Maybe you’re right. I’ll save that story for another time.”
Jack and Terry just looked at each other, wondering what that was all about.
“Hey, man, I think we need to get rolling. It’s getting late. I’ll go get Bobby and Sherry and we can make like a tree.”
“Jack, why don’t you stay here with me until they are ready. Amy has duties to attend to as a good hostess, as her guests leave, and you and I can get to know each other a little more.”
“Mom?!” Amy said with direct stare and mortified look on her face.
“Don’t worry, honey. We won’t talk about anything important.” Chrissy said as she made a motion to zip her lips at her daughter and then winked at Jack as Amy and Terry were walking out of the kitchen.
“Amy talks about me at home?”
“I can’t say,” Chrissy said with a huge smile. “But I will tell you that your friend there thinks a lot of you.”
They made a little small talk. About the only real thing that Chrissy said was asking Jack if he had a suit. And she strongly hinted that he should consider wearing it for the date tomorrow, the date he had been dreaming about ever since he knew what a date was.
Terry, Bobby and Sherry came into the kitchen a few moments later. They thanked Chrissy for the hospitality and walked out through the garage. As they climbed into the car, Sherry was the first to call shotgun.
Thirty minutes later, Jack was unlocking his front door. He still wasn’t sure what all had happened. He knew he had a date, that was the important part, but he really didn’t know everything that happened around it. And the ride home was a blur.
***
Opening the door, he was surprised to find his sister standing there.
“What’s up, Nicole?”
“Hot date tomorrow, Bro?”
“How…”
“Everybody is talking about it. What happened? I heard Paul Murphy was absolutely raging. What did you do? I thought I was going to have to render first aid when you came home. That’s why I told Mom I would wait up for you. Did you want to borrow my car?” she blurted, barely taking a breath.
“Ok. So… yes, I have a date with Amy tomorrow night. I don’t know everything that happened. You might talk to Terry, but he said Paul was mad… I don’t know. But I’d love to take your car. Mr. Prince said I could take his 911, but I would still rather show up in your car than mom’s or dad’s. “
“Well… I’m not talking to Terry, he kind of creeps me out. Not as much as your friend Bobby, but still. And I asked if you WANTED to borrow it, I didn’t say you actually could,” she said with a laugh. “You still aren’t THAT interesting. Anyway, I’ll talk with you in the morning. There are some things I heard that you probably ought to know.”
“Thanks, Sis. I’ll see you in the morning. And for your information, I coulda’ handled Paul Murphy if it came to that.”
***
After the last of the guests left, Amy plopped down on the sofa next to her mom. He dad blew them both a kiss and headed up the stairs.
“So?” Chrissy started, “are you gonna tell me what happened?”
“Mom, it was so sweet,” she started, “he started the ask me out and instead he asked if I would marry him.”
“No! Get out. Really?”
“Yes. I felt so bad for him. I could see him trying to pull the words back in as soon as he said it. He was so embarrassed. But I wanted to grab him and hug him. Then Sherry Cross came over and Jonathan came to the kitchen. What did you say to him?”
“He looked pretty rough when he walked in, Honey. I couldn’t understand, because just looking at him I would have thought you told him you wouldn’t go out with him. I tried to cheer him up a little. Then we talked about his name.”
The two talked for a little while and Amy let her mom know how excited she was to finally get to have a real date with the boy she’d always liked. When they were done, she all but floated up the stairs to her room, thinking of her big date.