This is one of the excerpts from the beginning of Planning Vengeance – Broken Path Part I on Amazon (Kindle link). It’s currently on sale for only $0.99 (regularly $2.99). Please note, that we are skipping ahead in the book for this except.
Saturday, 12 September 1981
Jack couldn’t stay in bed one minute longer. The sun had only peeked above the horizon fifteen minutes before. He decided to go downstairs and make some breakfast. Maybe watching cartoons could occupy him until a reasonable hour. But what he really wanted to do was head over to the Prince’s garage and start working on his car. Read More
He was excited for so many reasons… he actually had a car. And it was one of the coolest cars ever made… a Ford factory-built, limited-edition almost racecar. And while he had been a “car guy” as long as he could remember, he really hadn’t worked on any cars much. He’d helped his dad change oil or rotate tires, and even looked on and passed wrenches as his dad swapped an alternator on his old Toyota, but that was as far as it had gone. But now he was going to have the opportunity to wrench on the coolest car he could imagine owning.
He hadn’t said anything about the car to any of his friends. He wanted it to be a surprise. Amy was on-board and so they had fun sharing their secret.
As Jack ate breakfast, he looked back on his week. It was a week he never could have imagined a year ago… or even three months ago. Here he was dating the girl he had admired from afar for almost seven years. He’d thought their friendship was lost years ago, but she’d held the same feelings for him. Just six days ago, he’d flown back to Virginia from a dream trip to Michigan with his family and his girlfriend’s family. All of them got along amazingly well, especially his mom and Chrissy. And it wasn’t just that they had flown, but it was a private jet. They had taken a limo out to Patrick Henry Airport and back, too.
And then school… he had two classes with Amy, just before and after lunch. They had the same lunch period, too, so they got to spend the whole middle of the day together. He had been able to swap lockers with Bobby and so his was right across from Amy’s… they stood back to back at the lockers. And he and Amy being together made a pretty big splash, too.
Aside from the obvious, he was seeing a huge change in Amy. Before, she said hi to people in the hallways, but that was about it. No guy would think to talk to her beyond that, but even girls didn’t talk to her much. For the guys, they were probably afraid of Paul’s wrath, but even girls seemed reserved around her. Now, she was a center of attention. And while Jack wasn’t thrilled that guys… including lots of guys way more popular than he ever wanted to be… were always talking to her in the hall, he saw that she had built a lot of confidence. Even in the few days of school, he saw that she stood straighter when she walked, and held her head up. Maybe, he thought, it was that confidence that also drew in girls… aside from the girls that already knew her well… to talk with her.
He loved the ‘new and improved’ Amy even more. He had already known what a warm and caring person she could be. He’d seen that in fourth grade. It just took getting her out of the shadow of Paul that allowed her to blossom.
Jack had to fight down the anger he had toward Paul. He felt the bullying, overbearingness and constant tearing down of Amy’s self-esteem and confidence had hurt her for too long. As he thought of the years she had been in his orbit, it made him want to beat the snot out of that goon. But then his father’s words came back to him… that wouldn’t make you any better than him.
Happy thoughts brought him out of it… and The Bugs Bunny/Roadrunner Show. It was coming on, so he could escape for a little while. Maybe he would allow himself to dream of dropping an ACME anvil on Paul. That gave him a smile…
At nine the phone rang. Jack sprung from the couch to grab the phone before the second ring… just a little too slow, but he answered, out of breath, “Hello?”
“Hey, Jonathan, I thought you would be here by now…” Amy said softly into the phone. “Are you just waking up?”
“No, I got up a little before seven. I was just relaxing, enjoying a little breakfast and watching Bugs Bunny. I didn’t think your parents would appreciate me coming over that early. Are you just getting up?”
“Silly Boy… no. I just got home. I ran an errand with my dad and then we went to Waffle House for breakfast.”
“What kind of errand? Anything good?”
“Just a boring old errand. I had to drop off a car at someone’s house for him.”
“Cool, what were you driving? Was it fun?”
“I drove the blue Mustang. I guess it was fun. It’s kind of persnickety, though. The clutch on the 911 is pretty easy. The Camaro isn’t nearly as easy, but I’ve gotten used to it. The Mustang was really tough, though. You have to ‘feed it more revs’ my dad said, before you let off the clutch. I got the hang of it but didn’t like stoplights.”
“What are you doing now?” Jack asked.
“Just waiting for my boyfriend to show up so I can help him work on his car. I found some old clothes I could get grubby in. Then I plan on taking him out to dinner… if he wants to…”
“Oh… He’d be an idiot if he didn’t want YOU to take him out to dinner,“ Jack laughed.
Amy giggled a little. “The keys are up on top of the visor on the passenger side. See you soon. Kisses.” With that, she hung up.
Jack sat there for a moment, perplexed… Keys on top of the visor?
He ran out of the front door in his pajamas and bare feet. Sitting backed into the driveway was the Acapulco Blue 1969 Ford Mustang Boss 302. Filled with excitement of the anticipation of driving it, as well as a touch of nervousness over the thought of damaging it, Jack raced back in the house.
Fifteen minutes later, hair still wet from the shower, Jack was dressed and out the door, leaving a note for his parents on the kitchen counter… as if they could possibly doubt where he was. He hopped in the car and fired it up. As the 302 breathed its staccato rhythm, Jack wondered exactly how he’d managed to miss that sound when the car backed into the driveway. As soon as he released the parking brake, the car started to roll down the slight incline of their driveway. But even with the hill helping him to get rolling, he managed to stall the Mustang as he let out the clutch turning onto the street.
“That was embarrassing…” he said out loud to no one in particular. “Take two.”
He fired the Mustang back up. He gave a little more gas and very gingerly eased off the clutch. And stalled it again.
“Take three. Third time’s the charm.”
This time he leaned into a bit more and ended up leaving parallel streaks of rubber for about forty feet up the road.
“Not the smoothest… and if my parents weren’t up before, they are now,” he said to no one in particular… again. “I’m going to have to work on that,” a grin spreading across his face.
He was thinking that he was quite glad he hadn’t taken Mr. Prince up on his offer to drive the Mustang to school. It would have been mortifying to have had these results in front of his girlfriend’s dad.
Jack was able to get a better handle on the car after driving it a little. He stalled it once more and did one nice little burnout in downtown Phoebus, but not quite as long as the one he managed in front of his house.
As he pulled up in front of Amy’s, he saw the garage open and Mr. Prince walking toward the door, wiping his hands with a red shop towel. Jack rolled to a stop behind one of the closed bays and hopped out of the car.
“I love hearing that car coming down the road. It has a nice burble,” his girlfriend’s father mused. “So… did you stall, or did you do a burnout?” he asked.
“Both, Sir,” Jack responded. “Sorry. It took me a minute to get the hang of the clutch. And that 302 is a little rev happy.”
Bill laughed. “When I bought the car, I must have laid fifty feet of rubber in front of the guy’s house on the test drive. Stalled it twice at traffic lights, too. That thing is a beast, but it does not like low RPMs. So, no worries.”
Amy stepped out of the garage and gave Jack a quick hug and a peck on the cheek.
“My little girl, on the other hand,” Bill continued, “she gets in it and drives it like it was built for her. No stalls, no burnouts, no lugging the engine. And then she tells me that she couldn’t get the hang of it.” He shook his head. “Sounds like she got the hang of it faster than either of us. What do you think, Jack?”
“It’s the beauty that soothes the savage beast, Sir,” was his reply.
“Good answer, my boy… good answer.”
Amy beamed at him as he stepped into the garage to see his car.
“Why don’t you roll that Shelby out onto the driveway to give it a good bath. I’m anxious to see how good the paint is, and it’ll need a long wash, inside and out, and a good waxing. Maybe you can get that done before your dad gets here with the parts to get started with the fun stuff.”
Amy and Jack rolled the car out and spent the next three hours cleaning every nook and cranny, inside and out. Even the underside and engine bay had their turns. When they were done, they did a quick cleaning of the exterior again. Bill then brought over a buffer and started showing Jack how to buff the paint. He taped the edges so that Jack wouldn’t burn through the paint in those areas and supervised while Jack worked the car over for another hour. Amy spent that time deep cleaning the interior.
Ed had shown up and unloaded a van full of parts. Boxes big and small were stacked in the garage bay where the Mustang had been. Then he left to take the van back to work and get his car. He pulled into the driveway again just as Jack finished hand waxing the car.
Jack walked over to his father and turned back to look at the Shelby. It gleamed.
“Jack, that looks amazing,” Bill said as he approached the two Dixon men. “I never dreamed it would look that good from just a buff and wax. The exterior looks as good as new… maybe better.” He turned to Jack, “Excellent work, young man.”
“Oh my gosh, it’s beautiful,” Amy gushed as she squeezed Jack. “I can’t wait to see it done.”
“Mr. Prince, do you need us to help you with the truck?” Jack asked.
“Not yet, Jack. I have plans for it, but after seeing that Shelby of yours, I’m more excited to see it finished. For now, I think I’d rather help you. We can team up on the truck later.”
After a quick lunch, Jack went into the garage to see what parts they had. His father had a packing list and they checked off everything. Bill directed Amy and Jack on where to place everything, and they cleared out the spot for the Mustang to roll back into the garage. Before long, Bill produced a clipboard with a checklist on it several pages long.
“This is something I swiped from the guy that did a couple of my restorations. It is a checklist of every system in the car. We can go through it and see exactly what needs to be done. Then we can look at the inventory of what parts and pieces we have and see if there is anything left to pick up or order,” Bill instructed.
Working as a team, they took the next two hours going through the exhaustive checklist. Amy sat on a stool at one of the toolboxes and read each item on the list. As she got more comfortable with the names of everything, she started looking through the inventory of parts on hand while waiting for answers on the systems the guys were checking. By the time they had finished checking the car, she had already figured out what was on hand to work with. She had a pretty good idea of what they still lacked, and it wasn’t much.
Bill pulled out another checklist from the big Snap-On roller cabinet at the back of the shop. This one he clipped on another board and hung it from a magnet on the lift by the car.
“This checklist goes through the order I like to work on things on the car. A couple of these can be done parallel, but it gives us a good structure to go through the car in an organized fashion instead of all willy-nilly,” he said.
First on the list was the fuel system. Big Bob, the previous owner, had noted that the gas had been in the tank since the 1960s. That had to go. They also had to check the tank for rust and scale. It was one of the big pieces that they didn’t have on hand if it needed to be replaced. While Jack and Ed took on the task of removing the gas tank, Bill drained the oil from the engine, transmission and rear axle. He also drained the cooling system. He planned on replacing the fluids, running the car a little bit and replacing them again. There didn’t appear to be any leaks, so there was a chance the seals were still good. Having the car on a lift made the work go by pretty fast. The toughest part was dealing with the gas tank. It was almost full and was as much as Jack, Ed and Bill could handle, even with a jack supporting it. But they got it to the ground, shook it up to suspend whatever dirt they could shake free, and drained it into one of the barrels Bill had in the garage for fluids.
Opening the gas tank up, Bill was surprised to see that it was in pretty good shape. There was some varnish from evaporated gasoline, but it was otherwise clean and rust-free in there. The outside of the fuel tank, like much of the rest of the underside of the car, was also rust-free. Apparently Big Bob had sprayed a little clean oil on the bottom side of the car every so often to keep it from rusting. It had done its job quite well.
In no time, Jack had muscled the tank back into position and started replacing fuel lines and filters. As he did that, Ed and Bill checked, then lubed all the tie rod ends, ball joints and other wear items under the car. Finally, the transmission and rear axle were refilled, the engine oil drain plug was replaced, the cooling system was buttoned up, and the car was lowered to the ground.
Amy filled the radiator with coolant while Jack pulled the carburetor off the engine. Bill gave Jack a crash course in carb rebuilding while Ed replaced the valve cover gaskets. Then Amy tackled filling the engine with oil and Ed dumped a few gallons of gas into the tank. In no time at all, the carb was back on the engine, looking brand new, between the freshly cleaned aluminum valve covers. Ed dropped the new battery into the battery box in the trunk.
It was almost dinner time and it was the moment Jack had been waiting for. He slid behind the wheel and turned the key. The starter whirled to life. Bill dribbled a little gas into the top of the carb, and the engine barked. A flame shot out of each exhaust pipe, which exited under the side of the car just in front of the rear wheels. Then it died.
“Again,” Bill called from under the hood. “And I probably don’t have to tell you to stay clear of the exhaust,” he added with a smile.
Amy stood next to her boyfriend, while Bill dribbled a little more gas into the carb. Ed stood at the front of the car, eying the fire extinguisher on the toolbox nearby.
Jack turned the key and the car barked once more. Bill dripped a little more gas in and the car barely avoided stalling. Then it sat, roughly idling. Bill grabbed his long flathead screwdriver from his back pocket and started fiddling with adjustments on the carb. The idle smoothed out.
“Give it some revs,” he shouted over the noise of the engine.
Jack bumped the gas pedal a couple of times. The engine barked in response. It was marvelous. And loud… really loud. The factory “glasspack” mufflers didn’t do a lot to quiet the din from the 289 ‘Hi-Po’ engine. And Jack just sat there with a grin. Amy kissed him on the cheek and gave him a thumbs up.
Bill told him to cut it off, and Jack turned the key back, killing the engine and returning the garage to silence, leaving everyone’s ears ringing a bit.
In the excitement and the noise while the car had been running, nobody noticed the black BMW 2002tii slowly roll by the house, Paul glaring in the direction of the open garage door. He seethed inwardly. He smiled and made nice at school, but what he really wanted to do was smack down both Jack and Amy. Wrecking them hadn’t worked… but the police hadn’t shown up, either.
He was smart enough to realize that he might not be able to take either of them in a fair fight… much less both of them together. So, he needed a plan to make sure it wouldn’t be a fair fight. But for now, he had other lessons to teach.
***
As much as Amy had loved going to Darryl’s 1895, she was in the mood for something different. She picked Jack up after giving him a chance to clean up. They’d spent the day working on the car, and now it was time for her to deliver on her promise. They went to Capri Pizza over in Willow Oaks. It wasn’t fancy, but it was good food and they would probably see friends there.
It was prime teenager time for the Italian restaurant. They had a pile of kids from Kecoughtan High School on one side of the room, and a slightly smaller bunch from Phoebus High School on the other side. And while the schools were rivals, there was a fair amount of social mingling. Some of the kids had gone to Jones Junior High, which fed both schools. Others had grown up skating at Plaza Roller Rink or Roll-a-way Rink and were friends from that.
As Amy and Jack slid into their booth, Cy showed up with Tracy Tapper. Amy saw them and invited them to join. Jack quickly got up and moved to Amy’s side of the table so that Cy and Tracy could sit down.
“Are you guys dating now?” Jack asked, as he got elbowed under the table by Amy. Tracy kind of laughed. “Normally I would say that Cy had been bugging me and I agreed to go out once if he would stop asking after that…” She smiled and looked over at Cy. “But that was actually before you guys met me at Darryl’s. We’ve been seeing each other since Valentine’s Day.”
“Wow. Good for you,” Amy said.
Tracy slid a little more toward Cy in the booth and he stretched his arm around her. Amy smiled at them, happy for their happiness.
They all enjoyed a nice Italian feast, Amy and Jack splitting a giant Calzone, while Cy and Tracy shared a pizza. The four made small talk for a little bit before Tracy asked, “Whatever happened to that jerk, Paul?”
“Long story. We thought he was letting it go… we had a couple of peaceful days at school. Then he chased us in a car. But we haven’t actually talked to him since July,” Amy replied.
“Yeah… when Amy knocked him out,” Jack added.
Tracy’s eyes went wide. “Oh my God, really? You kicked his ass?”
“Actually, I kicked his head,” Amy eyes dropped… with a little smile. “Jack had softened him up for me though. He’d dropped him on his butt already a few minutes earlier.”
“We called a truce and he had honored it, until the car chase” Jack added, leaving any mention of the gun out of it.
***
The black BMW rolled slowly through the Willow Oaks Shopping Center parking lot. It pulled into a spot a couple of rows behind the Fathom Green 1969 Camaro Z28.
***
After dinner and a little more conversation, the couples went their separate ways. Oddly, Tracy was picking up the tab for her and Cy’s meal, while Amy was treating Jack. The girls got a good laugh out of that as they all headed out into the parking lot to get in their respective cars.
Amy held the keys to the Camaro as he walked her to the driver’s door. Always the gentleman, as he opened her door, she slipped him the keys and deftly scrambled over the console and shifter into the opposite bucket seat. Jack stood there in amazement that she could not only slip from one side of the car to the other but do it while making it look so effortless.
Not one to argue… at least with her… Jack dropped behind the wheel and keyed the Chevy 302 to life. It didn’t have the roar of his Shelby, and not even the staccato of the Boss Mustang, but it had a very satisfying burble coming from the dual exhaust.
“Walk on the beach, my love?” Jack said… not really intending to drop the L-word.
“Absolutely,” she responded, suppressing a giant grin. Him using that word hadn’t snuck past her unnoticed.
As they made their way to Buckroe Beach to take a moonlight stroll, neither noticed the black BMW skulking along behind them. Paul hadn’t forgotten that he wanted revenge, he just knew he needed to be careful of when he took it. He had no desire to be caught… and it was something he thought about. But it wasn’t enough of a deterrent to stop him completely from seeking his revenge. He was still enjoying the lessons he had taught that stripper and her friend. These two weren’t going to get the same treatment, but he was still looking forward to it.
***
As Amy and Jack walked on the beach, she turned to him and said, “Do you remember on the day that we confronted Paul… I was telling you how I felt?”
“Yeah, I guess,” Jack replied with a gentle smile. “You told me that you liked me and one of the things was that I made you feel like a princess.”
Amy smiled. “That is probably about what I said… but what I meant was that you made me feel like a valuable person. I know I shouldn’t have felt the way I did before, but I didn’t feel like I had value.” She reached her arms up around his neck and Jack wrapped his arms around her lower back. “But when I was talking to you, I stopped short.”
“I remember… something about what your mom said. You said you’d tell me later. You can tell me anything. I’ve fallen in love with you, Amy. I knew I liked you. I knew that in fourth grade. I’ve known that every time I saw you in the hall at school. But I didn’t know you would make me feel the way you make me feel.”
“I love you, too, Jonathan. I always hoped I would have the chance to know you like this… and to love you. Thank you for giving it to me.”
“So, Amy, what did your mom say?”
Amy smiled. She kissed him gently on the lips. Then she laid her head on his chest, looking up at him. “She told me that night… that very first night when you asked me out… She told me that after she talked to you, she knew that you were the kind of boy I should marry. I don’t know what life holds for us, but I know that I want us to spend it together.”
***
In the parking lot, Paul sat in his darkened car. He was holding a rifle scope in his hand. From his vantage point, all he could see above the seawall was Jack’s head. If he thought he could make the shot, he would get the rifle from the trunk and take it. But he knew better. He’d been practicing, but he wouldn’t be able to make a head shot at this distance, especially not without even a warm-up shot, or some way to tell how close the shot was and how to adjust.
***
A block away sat another car. In the driver’s seat sat a young woman named Melody Jenkins. She was holding binoculars and watching the driver of the BMW. She knew his name was Paul and he was her mark. She had been following him for a couple of days. She was pretty sure he’d not spotted her. But she took her training seriously and knew more about him than anyone else. She had taken one of her shifts off and had a teammate cover for her. That had given her the chance to gather some other intel.
She knew this was a training exercise, but she was beginning to think it was something more. First thing in the morning, Sunday or not, she needed to have a conversation with Mr. Dixon.